Sunday, April 11, 2010

A Drunken Dream.. [poem]

Hey yall, here's a poem I wrote yesterday to keep from dying from boredom at this forum. Comments are welcome <3

A Drunken Dream…

In a drunken dream
you came to me
and in your beautiful brown eyes
I could see
Tears ‘cause of me…
told me you felt deceived
‘cause the lack of affection
you had received from me.

And in my sleep
I felt my heart-beat

I felt myself get upset ‘cause
to all of my affections
you are the object.
and I never wanna
see my face in your
tears reflect.

So upset I was pulled
out of my drunken dream
and as my sleep ceased
I realized the tears belonged to me…

© 2010.

1 comment:

Olive Rosehips said...

INCREDIBLE! I found your prose moving and enjoyed the ending that I never saw coming. Profound even.